One, two, three, four, five I’ll open my eyes on the count of ten and everything will be all right.
What happens when your character opens her or his eyes?
One, two, three, four, five I’ll open my eyes on the count of ten and then everything will be okay. When I opened my eyes I found myself in a sea of darkness. If was as if all the light in the world got sucked into a black hole. It was so dark that I thought maybe it wasn’t the whole world around me, maybe I was blind. I called out her name but Helen didn’t answer. I thought that maybe she was playing a trick on me.
“Come on Helen!” I screamed. “It isn’t funny!” I yelled hoping she’d admit that it was some silly game she was playing but she never answered.